Wednesday, 6 March 2013

Shape Poem

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A 
descending
drizzle of tiny
clear crystals, hitting
the sharp blades of grass
and the glass of windows, sliding,
racing one another down to the pane.
Her reflection is captured as she watches,
the image of her features almost trapped in the
splattering glass. The pitters and the patters accelerating
as she observes the sparkling droplets collecting on the rim of
the panes. She watches intently as ducks plop and paddle through
the Puddles, their webbed feet disappearing beneath the shallow murky
surface. In a flash, they shake their matted down, the yellow blur a bright
contrast to the drab fog. Her gaze drifts from them but remains fixed on
the drizzle before her. And then, suddenly, the rain abruptly comes to a
halt, everything still and silent. Almost imperceptibly, the sun peeks out
from behind the clouds which conceal it, illuminating. The
droplets remain clinging to the blades of green,
glinting like tiny shards of glass.
It’s over. For now. 

By Clementine Page 9Bt

2 comments:

  1. I love this; the shape, imagery and sound of the words when you say them aloud. Awesome !

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  2. This would appeal to me if only for the shape! However, like Carmen I find the poem engaging through clever imagery and use of the third person. Excellent work IMO!!

    cheers

    Andy

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